The whiskey priest had always shown some degree of high moral standards as I followed him, but he seemed to always end up conflicted and confused shortly after. In the priest's final moments, however, he only portrayed ethical behavior, with no evidence of a relapse into fear and uncertainty. I watched as the priest prayed about his daughter, begging God to spare her and condemn him. He only sought to better the future of his only kin, and cared not about his impending entry into the afterlife. I am sure that this example of immense unselfishness can be used to define the priest's true character overall, as this is how he behaved at the time of his certain doom.
It was unfortunate to see the whiskey priest, who had fought so hard for both himself and his religion, be disposed of in such an untimely manner, but there was a silver lining in that I got to see and record the priest's great courage and selflessness when faced with death. Before this point, it was hard to tell who the priest truly was, but in his final moment, his last chance to prove himself, the whiskey priest overcame all that had been hindering him and finally put true faith and generosity above all else.
Brownie,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you made the connection with a situation in the beginning of the book. It showed the vast difference in the priest's character from then up until now. It also made for good closure- like, when you finish wrapping a present and tie the bow on top. (Your connection being the bow) Nice nice nice. :)
Great job Zachary! Like ally said its cool how you tied his character back to the beginning of the story. He has really changed on his long journey to "freedom". You do sound like a reporter finding a great story. It really makes you think that in the end the whiskey priest was really a good man inside after all.
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